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Iron Man 2: At the Core of It:

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Iron Man 2: At the Core of It:


This tightens up Iron Man 2, which was plagued by a rambling story, and a not terribly exciting plot i.e. bad guys want to get Stark-tech, failing which they copy it; bad guys wear armoured suits. This edit is a lot tighter, things move faster, and Venko is less cartoonish.

This is definitely better than the original, although there is only so much that can be done with the plot (see earlier), and its gaps (err, doesn't anyone want to talk about how awful Stark Sr. was to Venko Sr.? The military using armoured suits?) and the sloppy science (I am fairly sure you can create a new molecule, but not a new, non-radioactive element).

Thanks again for the work!


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