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JMS must have had a mad scramble writing the first several episodes of season 5. After all, WB cancelled Babylon 5 after season 4, and TNT picked them up only at the last moment. That makes weak narrative understandable, though still not enjoyable. Hence this effort to improve the start of Season 5.
Goal: Make the first half of Season 5 more enjoyable by making Byron less pretentious and a little less prominent. This fits the idea that he is a catalyst for Lyta rather than a driving force in his own right.
How: Cut, trim, and dub Byron where he is most condescending / look I'm so erudite / everybody owes us / I want to be a main cast member but my character isn't fleshed out enough. No more angels dancing on a pin, less Shakespeare, and shorter singing.
Result: The story flows more smoothly. There are fewer "he is sooo insufferable!" moments, and the cut bits didn't advance the story.
Consideration 1: I was never convinced that Byron is a martyr, with a place in (future) history books, rather than someone who wants to be a martyr, and will be forgotten with time. I prefer the second interpretation because that fits Lyta being the liberator for her people, with Byron merely being the catalyst that drives her there. To reinforce that narrative, the focus on Byron's character is slightly reduced. It's a bit more evident that Lyta, not Byron, is the titular Phoenix.
Consideration 2: Effort was made to keep the cuts as small as possible while achieving the desired effect. Many of them are micro-edits. Annoying bits that are relevant to advance the overall story are retained or only minimally trimmed. Again, I'm not trying to remove Byron. I make it clearer that he's a secondary character, not a primary one.
Scope: This includes all eight episodes with Byron. I'm not merging them into one big movie, I'm simply trimming the episodes.
Here's the cover for the concluding episode in this story arc:
Goal: Make the first half of Season 5 more enjoyable by making Byron less pretentious and a little less prominent. This fits the idea that he is a catalyst for Lyta rather than a driving force in his own right.
How: Cut, trim, and dub Byron where he is most condescending / look I'm so erudite / everybody owes us / I want to be a main cast member but my character isn't fleshed out enough. No more angels dancing on a pin, less Shakespeare, and shorter singing.
Result: The story flows more smoothly. There are fewer "he is sooo insufferable!" moments, and the cut bits didn't advance the story.
Consideration 1: I was never convinced that Byron is a martyr, with a place in (future) history books, rather than someone who wants to be a martyr, and will be forgotten with time. I prefer the second interpretation because that fits Lyta being the liberator for her people, with Byron merely being the catalyst that drives her there. To reinforce that narrative, the focus on Byron's character is slightly reduced. It's a bit more evident that Lyta, not Byron, is the titular Phoenix.
Consideration 2: Effort was made to keep the cuts as small as possible while achieving the desired effect. Many of them are micro-edits. Annoying bits that are relevant to advance the overall story are retained or only minimally trimmed. Again, I'm not trying to remove Byron. I make it clearer that he's a secondary character, not a primary one.
Scope: This includes all eight episodes with Byron. I'm not merging them into one big movie, I'm simply trimming the episodes.
Here's the cover for the concluding episode in this story arc: