Gaith said:
thecuddlyninja said:
What that has to do with CoG, whose finale has zero thematic ideas and is the opposite of an anticlimax (a big, dumb, unnecessary CGI fight), I don't understand.
Surely you see the common storytelling technique - to base the crux of the climax not on the emotions or strength of the characters in that moment, but instead to focus on overlooked or unknown details from years prior. IMHO, it's a crappy storytelling technique that undercuts the protagonists.
I don't see the commonality between those two, no. The big, dumb unnecessary CGI fight in CoG is not helped/hurt/affected by previous unknown or overlooked details, is it?
I also do not agree that the super dramatic climax of book 4, where we get our first interaction with Voldemort proper in the series because he is literally brought back into being, is overlooked. The detail of it being Harry's blood is hardly overlooked or unknown. It happens, Voldemort discussing it happening, Harry recounts it to Dumbledore and Dumbledore definitely reacts. If anything, it could have been more subtle that it was so important, but that's a different criticism.
Gaith said:
Myself, I consider mysteries greatly overrated. The future is a mystery. Tomorrow is a mystery, and tomorrow comes every day. Calculus is a mystery to me, and I've got no interest in calculus. In general, and especially when it comes to stories, I want to hear about personalities clashing and drama resulting in the moment. Context and backstory are important, but the passions of the characters in the moment should always take center stage in a dramatic climax... and, IIRC, neither Harry nor Voly particularly cared about the Elder Wand or who it belonged to. They were focused on fighting each other, but Rowling was playing storytelling calculus.
That's cool, to each their own. I am also into personalities clashing, drama and passion. Mysteries can enhance all of those things for me. The mystery of what will happen tomorrow rarely has life or death stakes for me (except it will one time, obviously) so I don't quite get the comparison. But then again, I studied calculus and love it. I don't want to put words in your mouth but I think we can both agree that I have more appreciate for the structure of a story/mystery (as well as the narrative/dramatic implications) and you are less interested in the form and more the function, yeah? And most mysteries don't improve that for you. As far as the Elder Wand goes, I don't think that's entirely accurate. Harry definitely cared (although the author withheld us from knowing his plan until the climactic point). Voldemort "cared" in the sense that he's aware of how wand ownership works but he assumed that taking it from Dumbledore's body would give him control. What you're getting at, I think, is that the book doesn't really seem to care about wand ownership much until it matters. Although, let's be clear, Voldemort couldn't kill Harry because he used his blood when returning to his form, not because he failed to properly own the Elder Wand. That failure kept Harry alive during the Seven Potters scene, though. In the movies, none of this is accurately portrayed, and viewers of the film would for sure only half understand the Elder Wand and that would be about it as far as explaining how Harry "beat" Voldemort. It's definitely an undercut, but I really appreciate that what the hero had to do to beat the villain was stay alive and figure out what the villain had not, which was his downfall. I much prefer that to a big, dumb physical fight. The producers of the films do not agree with my take, because that's what we got.
At the very least, let's agree that you use the phrase "storytelling calculus" to disparage and I would use it as a compliment and one of my favorite things about the series.
Gaith said:
Now, if Harry had given an impassioned speech about the need for magical cooperation, and, rallied many of the Slytherin students to the Light Side, thereby turning the tide of the battle, that would've been a climax. The guy who spent his entire childhood an outcast, rallying his bitter rivals to his side? That would have been drama. Instead, they all got locked up in the dungeons, or something. Not impressed.
I wholeheartedly agree and think that them locking up Slytherin students whole cloth is a big mistake. It would have been great from both Harry's perspective, and the Slytherin students. They should have gotten to make a choice, you know, the main thematic thrust of the entire series. Weakest point in the whole ending, for me.
Gaith said:
(Want more? Check out my essay
"How Harry Lost His Magic." )
I did, and found it very interesting. I think you articulate your thoughts on the series quite clearly. I dig that, though respectfully disagree with a lot of your issues. I think it comes down to what we take out of the main character. When you get to the end of your essay and you don't get what has changed or what the point is, and reference how much Luke grew in Star Wars, it snapped into focus for me. You must not get what I get out of the character Harry Potter. You literally say the main trio is defined only by their fight against Evil. The thing I love most about the story is everything the main characters go through outside of that. And sure, that is always the backdrop. Kinda has to be when big Evil is around and you're the chose one. But that is used to make broader points about adolescence, friendship, romance and family. I'm sorry that it doesn't connect with you the same way but at least we both get something out of the series.
That being said, you make a great point about the lack of expansion in the story, which set my imagination off thinking about how that could have worked. It would have been really interesting, I think. Now we're "expanding" but under the setup of uninteresting prequels to which we know the ending. I also wholeheartedly agree about the diminution of Ron, though not Hermione. Unless you mean the movies, in which case yes, definitely both and it's even worse for Ron in the films.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts, always interesting to read. It took me a while but a thoughtful response like yours deserved the same.