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Great little short! The post-"dream" transition was a bit abrupt, but I think that was a stylistic choice by the editor. Otherwise, everything is edited together seamlessly. Well done cuddly.
https://ifdb.fanedit.org/self-help/discussions/9060/
Great little short! The post-"dream" transition was a bit abrupt, but I think that was a stylistic choice by the editor. Otherwise, everything is edited together seamlessly. Well done cuddly.
https://ifdb.fanedit.org/self-help/discussions/9060/