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version 2 of the movie cover.
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Text is a good size now. But, at least for me personally, I think it's a bit ugly when one single word dangles by itself at the end of a paragraph like that.

I would suggest making it two paragraphs, the second one starting with the line "A year later, death is not what is was..."
 

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jswert123456 said:
well I will have to decrease my font size again.

You don't have to. Just make 2 paragraphs, don't space them out, the last line should still be where it is now.

I'll make you a quick example if you don't understand what I mean.
 

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That's pretty good. Here was the example I made by the way. The font isn't the same as I did it quickly using Arial. But you can see it's very readable and looks nicely spaced.

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I may go back and fit each sentence closer together. Or should I just leave it as is.
 

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taking a break, and put together this new cover
Drive (2011) version 1

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^ Very classy cover! (The text on the spine is squashed again though)
 

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jswert123456 said:
I will fix later.
here is version 2 of Drive (2011).

Why don't you fix it before posting again? I don't see the point in posting a new preview each time you make a minor change.
 

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jswert123456 said:

Spine title looks better, but you've created a bleed-through on the back, there's a yellowish line between the back cover and the spine. Seriously, pay more attention to the little details, take your time to make it right. And don't come back and say "I do take my time".
 

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Why don't you fix it before posting again? I don't see the point in posting a new preview each time you make a minor change.

How will I know if its fixed until I get feedback, a fresh set of eyes viewing it , may pick up on things I didnt see.
But i get what you are saying.
well I think it is fixed, got rid of the bleed thru. But I wont upload yet.
 

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How will I know if he really loves me?
 

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jswert123456 said:
How will I know if its fixed until I get feedback, a fresh set of eyes viewing it , may pick up on things I didnt see.
But i get what you are saying.
well I think it is fixed, got rid of the bleed thru. But I wont upload yet.

Wait until you get comments and address all of them before posting a new version. In your last post, you said "I'll fix it next time" and posted another draft with minor changes. Why not just fix everything and then post it. Slow down. Take your time, there is no need to rush.
 

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OK I wasnt rushing, there was a comment about the text on the spine, so I went in and fixed it, but in the process somehow created a bleed thru, that is now fixed.
But I understand what you are saying.
 

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jswert123456 said:
seriously dude, who is writing your material?
George Merrill and Shannon Rubicam.
 

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jswert123456 said:
But I understand what you are saying.


Do you consider it to be done? It still looks like it is missing some elements like a description and specs. Finish it and then post it.
 
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